why do i think;
why you're so far?
why are you so distant?
no! i shouldn't!
i've tried to hate you
still i failed to see through.
oh, love!
why am i so lame?
let me be.
i should let you be.
before i'm far too gone.
before nothing can be done.
i've tried to tell myself
it would be so better
to keep going our separate ways
for all you care, you're off.
so hold off.
you should hold off.
it's the one thing i've known.
i see you everyday
its so wrong in every way.
i stand far off trying to tell you
don't hear me, though, please
'cause i'm in love.
i'm in love.
boy, act deaf!
go on acting deaf
before you're too far gone
and nothing can be done.
'cause without me you got it all.
so hold off.
without me you got it all.
so be gone.
without me you'd be better.
without me you couldn't deter.
so hold on.
'cause with you, i've got no fight.
and i know this ain't right.
i'll have to be gone...
6 comments:
unbelivable but preciesly adorable coz I think this is the only poem here that contains simple words exhibiting deep thoughts... even a reader in rush can swallow it with ease... **hugs** :)
hey thanks!!
My lil angel, love cannot b contained and d only possibility of its being is its flow and dat U very well know...and if u ask me U r more than matured to have understood d ways of LOVE...and if d remains of something r causing pain in U then they r none other than the dependencies or expectations which are d bread n butter of mind. The memories of LOVE cannot never cause pain..I guess so ;-)
hey, not all my poems are my experiences...else, i'd be a dreadful vamp by now!!
Hey sori, if it felt like a lecture which i knw dat u r never in need of ! It was my necessity to respond to the feelings which ur poem generated in me ....
dnt take it to heart!
i didnt mean dat seriously
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