Friday, January 15, 2010

abandamned!


today is exactly the day
i don't want to live;
to be able to close my eyes
and dream the silhouettes.
to dream you, my angel of devastation,
perched upon your shrewd ways.
your sensuous aroma
still fills my lungs.
it scratches on the insides of them
and leaves them limp.
your aura of darkness,
so widespread and pulling.
it sucks me in the void-
the void that is You!

your deep eyes smolder me
i search endlessly in them-
the reason for all hopes
that you give me so casually.
your parted lips, inviting.
your glistening canines in them.
you purr your voice, enchanting.
and enchanted, i do come.

i come to the surface.
unable to die;
in your peaceful, eternal arms.
unable to scream;
even when i'm buckled under.
the surface is a labyrinth.
a maze that i'm lost in.
a maze full of your abandoned possessions...
just like ME...

9 comments:

Kshitiz said...

this one is really an awesome one....ohhh mannn what a creation....very nice...

MAHI said...

Thanx Kuki!!!
khush kar ditta!!!

Dipika Bhatia said...

"your deep eyes smolder me
i search endlessly in them-"

Ms Raghav...u'r wow...seriously!!

MAHI said...

thanx Dipi..... seriously!!

Aditya said...

yei sisi..... how can u write all these things?

Anonymous said...

glad to see a poem after a looooooog time... nice 1

MAHI said...

thanx Bro...
n thanx Anon.

Anonymous said...

as always you open up a new dimension altogether, the aroma of your words fill my head just as do the aroma that fill the lungs...angel of devastation and creation - you mahi

that was kickass

MAHI said...

thanx Dan.... this was cool!!!!
:-*